Saturday, October 28, 2006

Wake

Poem to another one gone


i am trying to remember if i should have
conceded when it all seemed probable
or if i watched you go by me with doubt.
you moved with subtle, graspable velocity.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Nuanced, evocative. -Tait

Anonymous said...

your prose is intimidating---because it is all together beyond beautiful